sometimes it's nice to have a fresh set of eyes on something you have been staring out, so i wanted to make this board to point out any grammatical/spelling errors that may come up. i didn't make this with the intention of being pretentious so please take this with a grain of salt lolz. i have noticed the oxford comma being used tho and i gotta say that i'm v happy~ uwu;
"This account is for the big spender who enjoys saving and really just likes to rakes in the money! You also get a vault with this account, but who cares!? You have the money to support it." -- [rake should be singular]
"An account aimed at those not willing to save much but wants a vault to store some of their items." -- [wants should be singular]
"If you keep your pets happy and healthy; they'll do the same in return." -- [semicolon should be a comma]